- ×Awkward or repetitive phrasing
- ×Grammar and punctuation errors
- !Inconsistent terminology or style
- !Weak transitions between scenes or sections
- iUnclear sentences and paragraph logic
- iContinuity, pacing, or chapter-flow issues
The hallway was very long and it seemed to go on forever stretched farther than Mara remembered.
She held the key in her palm. Its edge pressed a crescent into her skin.
At the end of the corridor, a door stood open. She had seen it closed in the earlier chapter that morning.
“Daniel?” she called. No one answered.